Score: 10

"short and smooth"

submission: A Gift to the Face

date: December 17, 2009

this may be a bit short for some people's taste, but the delivered joke couldn't be streched any more. that would have made the whole thing boring, cuz it would be the same contentstreched onto a bigger time period. making the enjoyment leaner.

but i'm talking too much: things are as good as they can be. good work!

Score: 8

"fun fun fun! ^^"

submission: Orange Adventure Xmas

date: December 12, 2009

this is definitely good stuff, the story is something with recognition value.
i remember that part of the level with the icy ledge oh too well.
your humor here is also fantastic: the ending as well as the terminator/mario references make a good laugh.
best pic definitely in this flash is the music. it's good enough to go along with the animation, and not too much standalone to keep ones attetion too much occupied.

only thing that bothered me is that your animation style doesn't very well fit the castle crashers. but i don't mean that in a bad way, seeing that most of the action would have been lost without this love for detail, making your style a fresh and unique alternative.

keep it up! :D

Score: 10

"finally!!"

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 11, 2009

your flashes were awesome enough already, but you actually are starting to explain the background and story of your main character.

i'm looking forward to the next episode. ^^

way to go!

Score: 10

"YAY! beat it!"

submission: Level Up!

date: November 26, 2009

finally the bug was fixed. i had the stupid problem that after day 0, starting in the nightmare, i couldn't see the girl anymore. so i didn't know where i was going... :(

but now that issue is out of the way, i went straight through the game -
and it only took me until day 2 ;D

i'm one of those people who are looking forward to the sequel. way to go! ^^

Score: 10

"DAMN!"

submission: Eddsworld Vs Cahj

date: November 25, 2009

you've been f**king bored or WHAT!? ^^
this is just so damn great - it's a flash for fans and fiends of edd AND cahj. ;)

you just keep going and going, always coming with new ideas...
and i love it!!

one last thing: THIS - IS - EPIC!! :D

Score: 10

"grand AWESOMENESS!!!"

submission: LARRY episode 1

date: November 20, 2009

i just find it baffeling how sick human humor can get - and i like it!

all in all, this is just EPIC, by all means.

only thing i found "bothersome" is the scene of larry with his fathers head, as to i mean what happend AFTER the conversation...

anyways, i'll say it again: THIS IS F**KING EPIC!!!

Score: 10

"*confused*"

submission: Jerry: The End

date: November 4, 2009

this may be the last episode - but is it really the end?

cuz the idea of yours is that all the other episodes, except the 1st one, is a wacky dream jerry had between the first and last episode?

or is it more a vision of some kind, showing jerry how his life will progress?

anyways, great work! & hurray, bonus cartoon! ^^

p.s.: who the hell is TIM fulp!? it's in your credits. is it just a typing mistake or what?

Score: 6

"yes, but no..."

submission: Versus The Halloween

date: October 11, 2009

very nice art style, good action scenes, great combination of those scenes...

but the ending was most disturbing. i do get the jokes, but it just doesn't fit.

it feels like your trying to copy people, whoms flashes have the same basics:
a flash about something, somewhere, etc. and in the end the is a weird, maybe sick turn in events. these are used to take the viewer by surpise, and make him laugh.
which again increases the chances of a positive vote.

this just doesn't work for you. even your characters reminded me of other things:
the bears looks like werwolf, er werbear versions of winnie pooh; and the pumpkin head somewhat reminded me of jack skelleton. the puns at the end may be overused, but still funny, if you use them right that is.

technically, i didn't like the anatomy of your characters. the heads seems to big for the bodies, the relation between height and width didn't seem right.
i don't know if this was on purpose, but i'm just saying.

anyways, you don't lack talent, maybe just ideas and improvement.
you now may think: ah heck, what the hell does he know about flashes?
i'm only trying to give you useful critic for your work. but one should never forget to praise what was well done.

for that i think you could ask your friends for ideas. or maybe they already have a story, which they'd like to see animated, but lack the possiblities to do so.
this would be a good win-win, don't you think?
and the problem with the atonomy is easily solved:
just try out sketching some things beforehand, with the good old pencil.
you could start off with only body parts:
hands for example. take your own for help. this way you can get a feel for sizes.

and always ask for second or third opinions, that always a good way to go.
that way you don't feel so pissed off when it happens that someone totally doesn't like your work, cuz you didn't do it completely yourself. may be a dick move, but it does make you feel better.

i guess that's about it. i hope this helps you in one way or the other.
please don't hate me, okay? ^^

Score: 10

"here's the answer... ^^"

submission: T3h N1nj4 Fla5h

date: October 5, 2009

at the end, there is dante.
and he asks why he's in this flash.

here's the answer:
cuz u kick (ninja) ass, dude!! ^^

Score: 10

"DDR is a cult! :D"

submission: Stamp on the Ground

date: September 17, 2009

i really like the in total idea of this flash, and the music fits juuuust right. ^^

anyways, if possible, i'd like to see a list of all the appearing charaters, in order of apperance, if it's not to much of a hassle.

cuz there were a lot of em i know, but couldn't come up with the names or which series/game/etc they're taken from. and that always somehow pisses me of a bit.

it's thank to flashes like this one, that people relive their former passions.
i hope to see a lot more like this from you.

OR ELSE! ^^